Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Writing and Music


Music is one of those mediums that helps drive my writing. Whether I am working on something dark or light, I prefer to have music in place to help set the mood. Not to say I haven't written in silence, but if I have my heroine and hero beating up bad guys I most certainly wouldn't use some let's-hold-hands-and-make-world-a-better-place music. Now my tastes are eclectic. At first, I always listened to R&B or even rap. But college and a cousin with an undying love for Prince (if you don't know about the great purple one...I'm so sorry. Cue the tears and a single dove released.) revealed a vast library of music I hadn't heard before. In particular Stevie Wonder and P-funk. I was like Flashlight, Brickhouse. Whoa! Bootay Shake!

But well, when it came to writing, I found that I couldn't work with my standard set of music. For me, certain music evoked emotions within me that compelled me to write scenes. And well Rumpshaker from Wreckx N Effects from high school doesn't give me those write romance/urban fantasy/ummm whatever genre feeling. And well, I write paranormal, so I need that creepy, dark stuff, or I need that light quirky stuff I heard in college like Blue's Traveler's Run Around. One of my favorites--I love her music, is Me'shell Ndegéocello. Her music has such feeling and I feel compelled to write. And thus the music does its job. Sometimes I don't feel like writing, but all it takes is the right song at the right time and I feel something that makes my fingers want to get the scene out. Even if its a song I would not listen to while in the car, if it has that "vibe", I'm more than willing to listen to it to fall into the moment. =)

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Nano Down the Draino

Well, my Nanowrimo has not gone well. I'm officially out on submission and my mind is in lalaland doing a strange dance. I've gone back to my third book and I would love to knock it out by the end of the month. (Yeah right.)

At this point I've made little progress. I wish I was much farther along by now:

Shawntelle's Third Book:
Novel Progress

It doesn't help that I work more now than I used to. As an independent developer I work as often as I have work. And of course I have plenty to do during the day.

Monday, November 9, 2009

Excerpt Monday

Here is the second part of my series which I started last month. I normally don't write about vampires, but for fun I started this series. If you would like to read Part I its in last month's Excerpt Monday posting. I still don't have a title, but one may pop up as I continue to work on it.

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Part I of This Story

As I drove to work the next day, I wondered why I didn’t tell the police about the night visitor who had rescued Molly and me. But who would’ve believed my story?

“Hi, officer. We’ve had a robbery attempt. But everything’s fine now since a blood-sucking vampire took out the creep and hid the body.”

Yep, I didn’t see that phone call going well. I’d found poor Molly hiding out in the girl’s restroom in one of the stalls. I’d expected her to call the cops, but as a teenager I would’ve flipped my lid as well. Her mother came and picked her up as I finished my call with the police.

The cops and Harlow’s owner of course applauded my bravery and said I worked well with such a dangerous assailant. Was that before or after I would’ve wet my pains when the guy pointed the gun at me?

I really should quit this place. But with community college bills and an apartment, I couldn’t afford to switch positions in such a turbulent economy. I had to face the facts—I was chained to the Mr. Happy Clown game like those florescent green mallets used to pound out those stupid clown figures you had to beat the crap out of for a measly ticket.

Last night's traffic of screaming kids and juveniles had filled the place. But on Saturdays, like today, the restaurant was packed. With a snort I thought, the guy should’ve hit the joint this evening to snag a bigger haul.

I entered the main office to find my boss, Chauncey Harlow, working on the accounting books on his computer. “Hey, Laney. Glad you could help out tonight.” The sixty year-old man hunched over his keyboard and squinted at the screen through his ancient bifocals.

After the robbery, I had asked for the day off to collect myself. Of course, the Saturday shift manager conveniently backed out.

I suppressed the response of, “I should’ve told Kyle he needs to bring his lazy ass in and stop taking an emergency evening off to get trashed at the local bar.” But as a soft spoken lady I replied, “It’s alright. I guess keeping busy is the healthy thing to do.”

Chauncey nodded. “After what happened yesterday, I plan to bring in some security around here. I’ve had problems before with those older kids causing trouble, but I didn’t expect to be robbed like that.”

“Video cameras sound like a great idea.”

“Oh, no. I plan to do more. The electronics guy referred me to a firm that does video cameras, security doors for the office, and training for our cashiers. He had great advice for how I can clean this place up.”

I’d told the police of my suspensions when I noticed the robber knew the exact time when the safe would open. My boss had balked after he heard the news, but he didn’t believe that someone would plan a robbery a children’s entertainment restaurant. I had to bite my tongue to keep from telling him that dollar bills from piggy banks worked just as well as the adult version.

“I need to check on a problem in the kitchen. Could you wait here for a call from the insurance company? I need to know a bunch of stuff about my premiums if I increase security at this place.”

He left without waiting for my answer. Didn’t he remember I worked as the shift manager?

Five minutes after he left, a knock sounded on the door. Perhaps one of the servers or cashiers needed help. I left the desk and then opened the door.

The vampire from last night stood there waiting. He formed a half-smile when he saw my surprise. The memories of the chilly flesh of his skin made me shiver. And those navy-blue eyes—I remembered how he clutched the robber in an iron-grip as he drank his life from his body.

The heavy door had blocked out the noise from the restaurant floor, but the full blast of cheesy music and games assaulted my ears and drove me away from my moment of reverie. Somehow my mouth moved. “Can I help you?”

“Is Mr. Harlow available? I'd planned to meet him here at 6:30.”

I gripped the door knob, but didn’t allow him to enter. “He had to check on something in the kitchen. Is there something I can help you with?” Other than a blood donation?

“Perhaps later, but right now I need to formalize the agreement between us for my services.”

So, he had to be the electronics guy. “You’re here to install the cameras right?”

He grinned and took a half step closer. “Apparently, you don’t know.”

“Know what? Chauncey said something about a consultant coming in to increase the security of this place.”

“Oh, I plan to make things much safer around here. I’m the new security guard.”

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Monday, November 2, 2009

Confessions from a Reality TV Junkie


Would everyone in the room who is addicted to reality television raise their hand.

*Raises hand*

If you are a reality television watcher like myself you love to watch the train wrecks as they happen. As a writer, reality TV for me is the ultimate idea generator. In the past I've watched:

  • The Millionaire Matchmaker
  • Flipping Out
  • How Clean is Your House
  • Hell's Kitchen
  • Project Runway
  • So You Think You Can Dance
  • Real Housewives of [Fill in the City - Atlanta, Orange County, New Jersey, you get the drift]
  • American Idol
  • Punk'd
  • The Biggest Loser
  • Moment of Truth (OMG, the word work train wreck is not good enough for this one...)
  • Trading Spouses
  • Nanny 911
  • Tabitha's Salon Takeover (Luv this show!)

I'm leaving out classics like Jerry Springer and Maury Povich (the real who's my baby-daddy show). To be honest, I couldn't get into Survivor or Dancing with the Stars. I tried, but it wasn't entertaining to me. I guess they didn't have enough of that hot mess factor I was looking for. :D

So what have these shows taught me? That if I can't think of unique characters for my books, then these places are filled to the hilt with ideas for me to tap, flip in a bowl, and slap in pan to sizzle into something interesting. Take the chef from Hell's Kitchen for example, he is a potty mouth chef from England. He treats the other chefs like crap, but I love to watch this show. (As well as the F Word on the BBC. Another BBC America addict here.) With all those personalities trying to cook a risotto properly there's bound to be a scene hiding in there somewhere to twist with a paranormal idea. Either with a loud mouth contestant or one who seems to have poor fashion sense.

So grab that remote folks and pull out that research paper. You can find plenty of what-if scenarios to utilize in your manuscript.

Sunday, November 1, 2009

Day 1 of Nanowrimo

Well, its the morning of day 1 and I've survived October. My agent approved my edits yesterday. Woo hoo! So I should be heading toward the rolling plains of Submissionville soon enough. For my nano novel titled, Seduced (that is the shortened name), I have already conquered 650 words. *pumps fist* Of course, it was midnight and I had the likelihood of typing out "Work makes Jack a dull boy." about fifty times. But after a quick look see I have determined I wrote coherent words with dialog.

For my third book, which I still plan to continue working with I reached this far:

Shawntelle's Third Book:
Novel Progress

Not bad, actually. I wanted to be at 50%, but 10% off is not a failure. I may be able to reach 75% by the end of nano. I didn't want to edit two books at once, but in the future that may happen so it may be for the best.

Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Four Days Until Nano

Well, my progress for Nano has gone much better than my current WIP. LOL As if last night, this is where I stand with my third book:

Shawntelle's Third Book: (AKA Get the Darn Thing 50% done Before Nano, Please!)
Novel Progress

I've followed Lynn Viehl's notebook and I have completed several pages of the Novel Notebook. I've also written a synopsis. A few books ago, I hated the darn thing, but with time they're not so bad anymore. Romance has a distinct formula and armed with GMC (goal, motivation, and conflict) for each character the synopsis flows out much faster. Of course, my synopsis is under review this week since I may have weak points and I may have to hash out the messy middle to toss in a subplot or two to hold the thing up with toothpicks.

Saturday, October 24, 2009

Nano Preparation


Thanks to the fabulous author, Lynn Viehl, I will be even more prepared for Nano next week. I plan to complete my first contemporary for the monthly write vest. Lynn posted a link to her Novel Notebook, a scrib document full of great details for a writer to fill out regarding their characters, settings, and plot.

If you want to be my writing buddy during nanowrimo I am listed over there as Shawntelle. (Yes, how original.) I'll have to post how much I followed Lynn's notebook and how useful I found it. I had planned to write a synopsis this week, but using the notebook should make that painful exercise less agonizing.

I'm continuing my sprints during the day to see how much of my third book I can knock out before Nano. Right now, I am 32% done. I'd love to have the book 75% or more done by next Saturday. Even if I wrote 5K per day I still wouldn't finish. But with a month off after the first draft, I would be fresh and ready to edit and complete my first werewolf book.

Shawntelle's Third Book:
Novel Progress